The Demon Wars..

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  1. Reira The Fallen Angel;)

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    Okay it time for me to upload a fanfiction story :) This story is (and will be) made with the precious help from my best friend Pein Must Kill :) He wrote the prologue because he knows how to make the perfect one ;)Next time it'll be my trun;p Thank you my dear friend and people here on the forums We hope that you'll enjoy our story :D


    Prologue:'The meeting'
    The rain was falling torrential upon the windows of the the small inn.
    It was hitting with great power on the windows giving the impression
    as one hundred horses were outside.But no one was wandering in the streets
    because of the rain and also it was already really late.
    Only a feminine silhouette was moving slowly in the middle
    of the road of this silent district of Dormol. She went into the inn
    with moves that seemed it wasn't raining at all.She walked through
    he almost empty parol and took off her traveling cape.She put it on the
    hanger next to the fire to get dried
    She sat on a table next to the fire place and stared to look around
    the room.Only one table was taken from two men dressed in black and also
    she couldn't see their faces clearly from the trembled fire of the
    candles.In the bar only a half-asleep bar tenter was clearing a glass
    with a white cloth.In other words the room was very silent.
    The young girl shooked her brown-blonde hair and sighed silently.
    She was very tired from the rest of the day and now all her body parts
    were in pain.Without second thought she touched the handle of the big
    sword which was laying next to her.By touching it she was feeling better.
    Only its presence there was making her to feel secure. After sometime
    a waiter came near her to take an order.When she told him what she wanted
    he left with steps that were losing from the strong sound of the rain that
    was getting harder outside.The strong wind was stared to hit the shutters
    with great force.The young waiter came back quickly to close the windows.
    The girl without giving importance to him she took off some papers
    to study,giving all her might.Not much time passed she realized with only
    a little glance that someone approaching her table.She lifted her face
    thinking that her food was coming.
    But in front of her the two men that were sitting to the other table
    appeared.Their faces were dirty and as they were smiling with awry mouths
    she could see at least three black teeth to each one 'Powerless demons..
    they are so stupid',she thought but she didn't want to make a fuss.
    They were stink like alcohol giving the impression that they haven't taken
    a bath for weeks.The one of them approached the girl stagger at her.He was
    very drunk.
    "Hey missy it's cold tonight.My partner and I feeling lonely.Would you
    like to warm our bed?". The other one was laughing like a stupid.
    She just ignored them.The alcohol had blinded them otherwise they would
    have seen the big blade next to her and they wouldn't teasing her.But her
    silence was bothering them.
    "You're not listening girl ?Or you want us to make you listen?"With
    these words they took out their knives that from their belts.
    But the girl again ignored them as she was looking at them with eyes
    like ice.The men shouted something and attacked her aiming for her head.
    By the time that the knives came in touch with her skin they
    shattered into million pieces."Huh?! Very bad quality" she thought.
    She made her move.before they surprise was disappearing from their
    faces she jumped on the table with her sword on her hand .
    The leathers that were covering the blade were off by themselves and
    now the only one that was glowing in the spooky light was that red
    blade of hers.
    She kicked the one on the chest sending him with power and force upon
    a table unconscious.After she through the other one in no time on her
    knees and the sword was a bit stabbed to his neck.Big blood drops were on
    the sword now....
    "Get the hell out of here and make sure that I won't see you ever
    again in front of me" she commanded as she was constricted her sword.
    Her voice was cold and harsh.
    The man was scared and he nodded to her that he was understanding her
    command.So he ran to take his unconscious friend outside in the rain.
    She shooked the blade on the air to get rid of the blood and the leather
    was back again.She sat on the table calmly.Behind the bar an other man
    around her age approached her...
    " Hey Brandon!"she greeted him.But this time with a big emotion.It was
    coming from her heart..
    "Welcome back Asther"..
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  2. DanteDevil01 Dante_Redgrave

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    Nice story. I really like the description of the sword. It reminds me of Sparda. Oh and the girl....... She's a tough cookie lol.
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  3. Reira The Fallen Angel;)

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    Thankiesss brother :)
    And yeah she is a tough one ;)
  4. Pein Must Kill New Member

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    Reeally great! xD (lol i don't really mean it)
    but i like it very much! :P Thank's nee-chan!!!!! :D
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    I also have to add that I had no idea who Sparda's sword looked like.... >.>
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  6. Sparda's rejected son Armored Tyrannoranger!!

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    Nice story. :)
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  7. Reira The Fallen Angel;)

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    Thankiess my dear :)
  8. Sparda's rejected son Armored Tyrannoranger!!

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    No problem. :)
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  9. ToCool74 Proud DmC Skeptic

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    When I saw this I thought it was a fanfic of "The Demon wars" from Castlevanai.

    But it was still a cool story.
  10. Reira The Fallen Angel;)

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    Thank you :)
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    this was pretty good i really liked it :)
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  12. Reira The Fallen Angel;)

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    Thank you ;)
  13. DeamonslayeR childish..immature..FUN.beware!!!

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    nooo problemo
  14. Reira The Fallen Angel;)

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    Well guys we left it for a little cause I don't have any ideas so far xD
    But I hope soon we'll be able to write something xD
    Sorry ...
  15. DanteDevil01 Dante_Redgrave

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    Well you better start thinking some ideas :P so I can read more into it lol
  16. Cosplaying Goddess Death Is But A Fickle Creature...

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    Yes, you must write more!...
  17. Reira The Fallen Angel;)

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    I promise that when I finish with my final exams i'll write more :)
  18. DanteDevil01 Dante_Redgrave

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    Ok I'm holding you onto that and you promised :P
  19. Reira The Fallen Angel;)

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    Ahahaha okay ;p
    Actually I've stared to have some ideas now so i think that will be sooner than I thought ^^
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