Read and Review Request Thread

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  1. Meg This is what a feminist looks like

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    Do you have a story that has been buried underneath the mountains of other stories? Would you like someone to read that story? Well then this thread is for you!

    Just fill out this here application!

    Title:
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    Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit):

    Doesn't have to be on here. If you've posted something on FF.net, or some other site then feel free to make use of this thread to! :D Also, please do not use this thread for reviews or concrit giving. Please keep that to the respected story's thread/site/PMs or VMs.

    Here's an example;

    Title: Death of a Devil
    Fandom: Devil May Cry
    Description: Dante has been having strange dreams about the death of his mother, but are they only dreams?
    Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?t=21192
    Requested Feedback: Concrit, though general reviews are welcome. :)
  2. Chaos Raiden Avid Gamer & Reviewer

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    Good thread. Rep+. :D

    I have two fan fictions buried deep, but I am not particularly looking anyone to read mine, as one is a Kingdom Hearts fanfiction and a DMC crossover with Resident Evil. :lol:
  3. DreadnoughtDT The name's DT.

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    Rep. +. Now we don't need to make a whole freaking new thread. Thanks, Meg.

    Why didn't I think of this earlier?

    Can someone sticky this, please? Or move it to the fanfic section, then sticky?
  4. Meg This is what a feminist looks like

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    ^I'm sure if you request it a staff member will consider it.
  5. LordOfDarkness The Dark Avenger © †

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    A very useful and helpful Thread. Usually useful and helpful Threads are the ones to be stickied, but we are not to say lol

    + Rep to you nonetheless ^_^
  6. Ian Watkins Dark Angel

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    Pretty good story and this is an exellent idea :D

    Rep+
  7. Crimson Chaos chaos breeds within

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    Title:crimson feather Fandom/Original Work:cross between fan fic and original work Description:story of a god who is given the task to enlist and fight alongside the greatest demon hunter of them all... dante. their mission? end the demon war. Link:http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?t=19841 Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit): review and concrit. side comments and ideas welcome. it is being co-authored by storm silves.
    ps. awsome thread meg, thanks. lol also myself and lord of darkness are reviving origions of nero. more info to come later
  8. Dragon King King Of Dragons

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    I got one:

    Title: Devil May Cry: Darkness Falls
    Fandom: Devil May Cry
    Description: The Darkness returns to reak havoc on the human world and it's up to Dante, Trish, Lady and Nero to stop it.
    Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?t=20182
    Requested Feedback: Critiquing, General review

    I don't continue works that no one seems interested in.
  9. Crimson Chaos chaos breeds within

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    i'll check it out tomorrow. i'm the same way. i don't even wanna do anymore on crimson feather until someone reads what little i have. lol
  10. Trish67 Bad a$$ Gunslinger

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    Title: A Very DMC Thanksgiving
    Fandom/Original Work: Devil May Cry
    Description: Dante, Trish and little Anissa have Thanksgiving with the family...
    Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?t=21338
    Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit): review, concrit
  11. LordOfDarkness The Dark Avenger © †

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    Title: Devil may Cry - Hell's Angels - DMC 5, Concept Idea.

    Fandom/Original Work: Devil May Cry.

    Description: Dante is now training Nero after the events that took place in Fortuna. They're following a trace of Dante clones in a City called Fallen Grace, until they get trapped inside Limbo City.

    Link: Devil may Cry - Hell's Angels - DMC 5, Concept Idea.

    Requested Feedback: Read and review. Helpful criticism also welcome.
  12. Dante's Stalker The Ultimate Dante Fan

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    Title: Chronicles of the Damned (was originally I Hate Everything About You)
    Fandom: Devil May Cry, AU
    Description: Cora and Dante are neighbours who, due to unfortunate events, are stuck together for the duration of their young lives. They become fond of each other but there's trouble looming on the horizon - Cora is slowly transforming into a demon, and Dante hunts demons. Having his brother, Vergil, taking an odd interest in Cora does not help the issue at hand.
    Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/showthread.php?p=301267#post301267
    Requested Feedback (Concrit): PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!

    I'm rewriting this fic, and I need all the help I can get to pick up on characterisation flaws, grammar faults, spelling errors, and areas that either don't make sense or don't progress the plot/doesn't aid in character development/ has no purpose but to fill blank space.

    Please don't think I don't need your opinion, however minor, or if you pick up on so many errors that you start to feel you can't possibly name them to me, PLEASE DO! I don't want reviews, I need help with this. So, please help me out? @_@
  13. Meg This is what a feminist looks like

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    Because FF.net is a crap shoot if you want concrit;

    Title: The Seventh Eidolon
    Fandom: Final Fantasy XIII
    Description: The war against PSICOM and the Sanctum has spilled over into civilian life. After Bodhum gets attacked Lightning swears revenge on the only one that can being responsible for the attack as well as the entire war. The Fal'cie. Post game.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6221763/1/The_Seventh_Eidolon
    Feedback: Concrit, (copying MV because that's how I feel) PLEEEEEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!!! I really really need concrit here! This story is my pride and joy! My Declaration of Ownership. My middle finger up Square Enix's massive fail of a butt! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!! Let me know of any grammar or spelling errors. Any thoughts on the characters, dialogue, plot, progression. ANYTHING! I'll be rewording some stuff that has already jumped out at me shortly, but PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE help. Pleash? :Oops:
  14. Shadow Dead Witch Walking

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    Title: Darlin'
    Fandom/Original Work: Original Poetry
    Description: ...
    Link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2920963/1/Darlin
    Requested Feedback (Review/Concrit): Concrit, please? ^^ *gives puppy dog eyes*
    (I'd not be adverse to anyone going through all my fics and concriting them, though. ^^; *accepts anon reveiws on the site*)
  15. LordOfDarkness The Dark Avenger © †

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    I have two 'read and review' requests.

    Title: Devil may Cry 5 - Hell's Angels.

    Fandom/Original Work: Devil May Cry.

    Description: Dante is now training Nero after the events that took place in Fortuna. They're following a trace of Dante clones in a City called Fallen Grace, until they get trapped inside Limbo City.

    Link: Devil may Cry - Hell's Angels

    Requested Feedback: Read and review. Helpful criticism also welcome.

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    Title: The Man In Red.

    Fandom/Original Work: Devil May Cry.

    Description: Dante during his 'Tony Redgrave' years. We see what he got up to whilst living out this alias of his.

    Link: The Man In Red

    Requested Feedback: Read and review. Helpful criticism also welcome.
  16. ReaperKnight Angel of Death taker of lives

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  17. Dante's Stalker The Ultimate Dante Fan

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    Title: With Love From Hell (inspired by With Love From Paris. I <3 Bruce Willis)
    Fandom: DMC
    Link: http://forums.devilmaycry.org/threads/with-love-from-hell-take2.9704/
    Description: Don't be fooled. NOTHING is what it seems. And yes, I'm just saying that to throw you off.
    Concrit: None please. I've revised this baby like four hundred times already, and it's still faulty. I know where the faults are. Concrit is not necessary. Reviews, on the other hand, I welcome with hugs and cookies.
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  18. lorddemolatron Resident Forum Dark Fantasy/ Cyberpunk fangirl.

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